#1:  Please show me that you understand at least one piece of feedback by explaining how you could improve your presentation and/or TKPPD after reading the feedback.  What exactly would you do differently and why?  Reference your presentation and/or TKPPD specifically. 

For my presentation I could have made it better by sticking to on way of knowing instead of using both emotion and culture. Using both made it a little confusing for my presentation because the two could easily get mixed up and the audience could be confused.. It would also benifitt from a more focused discussion  
 
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#2:  What questions do you have for me regarding the feedback?  If you don't have any questions, please write "I don't have any questions regarding the feedback."
I don't have questions regarding feedback